This Week we have been working on tuhituhi
take a look at my mahi and please leave a comment.
The Scary dreams
I went to bed and had a nightmare.so i had my diary in my hand and wrote about my nightmare.i said.Dear Diary,i was having a nightmare because i got scared. good night diary.good morning get up it’s time for You to go to school your friends are waiting for you.
Ok mum, I will.oh the bus is here your friends are there.goodbye mum & dad see you after school.then i was getting a nightmare.so my kaiako called my mum & dad.hi mum & dad at school today i had a nightmare at school today.oh ok wanna stay home tomorrow.yes please mum.ok get your stuff out of you bake.Ok mum,i will unpack my stuff then i can go to bed.”Good night honey”good night mum”.see you in the morning.it was a scary monster.it was in my dreams when i had that nightmare.he was trying to steal my jewels,chromebook,phone,and my desk.i have to sit in my bedroom to do my work.it was boring so i have to do something.so i called my brother.”Puanga can you come here for a second”.hi boy can i whisper to you for a second.he said.”ok”.so i said can you get the phone please.
Kia ora Misty-Rose - I hate having bad dreams! Sounds like a greedy monster wanting to take all of your things!
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Ngā mihi, Whaea Megan
What a scary moemoea, you are writing some awsome tuhituhi, keep up the mahi pai. Na mum
ReplyDeleteKia ora misty-rose I like that it has a scary dream. Ka Kite
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