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Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Tuhituhi-The Tomb.











This week we were using an image as a story starter Check out my tuhituhi.

The Tomb 


Dan had been digging all morning. Along with his team of fellow archaeologists, countless tons and dirt and sand had been removed. At first the mechanical diggers had done their bit, to be followed by spades and shovels. Now, as the team neared their prize, their tools became trowels and delicate brushes.

Hours of sweat and toil in the blistering heat had brought little reward as yet, but things were about to change. Dan stood in front of what he hoped would be the most significant discovery of his career so far, and gently began to untie the knot that had sealed the door for thousands of years…

The boy’s name is Tane.The girl’s name is Rosie.Tane & Rosie were stealing the jewels.they put the jewels into the rubbish bag.they give the jewels to the queen & king.after that tane & rosie went to find more jewels.then they went on a plane to London when they got there to the jewels shop.they saw a lots of jewels in there.Tane said “Let's get the jewels Rosie ” hahahahaha.hi queen & king we got more jewels from the store.`Good job Tane & Rosie you guys may have a day off`.`yes thank you queen & king`.so tane & rosie went to get an ice cream.but then the police got tane & rosie because they were stealing the jewels from the shop.so the police officers got tane & rosie.the police officers ask tane & rosie.the first police officer ask tane & rosie.`did you steal some jewels from the shop?.Tane & Rosie said ‘yes we have’.then you are under a rest forever young girl & boy.’no please don’t’.

Two Days Later


 The police officer Dan was trapping the boy & girl.the girl saw some girls that they were trapped forever as well. 



















1 comment:

  1. Great to see your tuhituhi mahi, you are improving more and more.Keep up the great mahi tuhituhi. from mum

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