Fairytale Ending Liy pushed back the branches and peered into the clearing. Sunshine drenched the ground as it poured through the canopy above.
She had been following the trail of clues for days, and she had finally reached her destination. Were the stories true? Was this really the place people in her village had talked about for centuries?
She hoped her own story would have a fairytale ending, but in the back of her mind a sickening thought arose – what if something more sinister waited ahead?
The girl's name was Lily. She went into the castle and saw some books,toys and food. She went into someone's room but she also saw a bed in front of the books.but someone was living in here. So she had to find a way to hide.she saw some trees in the castle and flowers.he went back to the castle to get some food but then the but the dancer was still dancing because he loves to dance.when lily find dancer dance.so lily want to dance.so they were best friends for ever.so they dance together and they had food together. They danced all the way to the Palace.they saw their mum and dad in the palace.they all went back to the castle.to have some food.then they play outside.they ask their mum and dad to listen to some music. They went all outside to have a party then they all went home.
Kia ora Misty-Rose.
ReplyDeleteWhat an imaginative story.I liked that the dancer and Lily became friends.I wonder what kind of food they ate.I think because the dancer lived in a castle,the food would be AMAZING!
What kind of music was the dancer dancing too?.I like dancing,if that's what you can call it,to country music.
Kia ora Misty-Rose - Room 9 here today.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used lots of describing words! I also really like the font and colour you have used for your tuhituhi.
Could you go back and re read your story to add capital letters?
It would be cool to add some animals into your story next time.
Bye, Room 9.